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Hi Rob <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w…" width="25" height="20" alt=":wave:" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="437" title="Hi!"/>

Great work! I love the concept, the little mouse is so cute hiding in the glass cup! I hope the cat doesn't eat him hehe. There are only a couple areas where I see room for improvement.

The areas with yellow highlights on the cat and the sky are a bit overblown; it causes a slight distraction within the artwork. Perhaps lowering the opacity of those yellow highlight layers a bit would work?

Also, the edges of the cat's fur is a bit too smooth/blurred. You might try masking the edges of the fur with the default photoshop grass brush (not the dune grass, the other one) to give it a more realistic appearance.

I love the colors you used and the overall mood of the piece! Well done!

This is the first official Critique I've written...hope it helps! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/h/h…" width="38" height="15" alt=":hug:" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="160" title="Hug"/>